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Uhhmm so I'm almost 20 now? And I read some of my stories and GOD, ARE THEY SHIT. LIKE THE GRAMMAR??? THE STORYTELLING??? I am speechless, that I thought it was GOOD at any point. The amount of verbs with -ing is diabolical and makes me pull my hair out! I think I might even unpublish everything, from pure embarrasement TT
          	ANYWAYS I really hope everyone's having a good day (especially you Selena)
          	Byee <3

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this message may be offensive 
Uhhmm so I'm almost 20 now? And I read some of my stories and GOD, ARE THEY SHIT. LIKE THE GRAMMAR??? THE STORYTELLING??? I am speechless, that I thought it was GOOD at any point. The amount of verbs with -ing is diabolical and makes me pull my hair out! I think I might even unpublish everything, from pure embarrasement TT
          ANYWAYS I really hope everyone's having a good day (especially you Selena)
          Byee <3

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Plot idea:
          You're a soul traveler aka when your body dies you switch to another body, that makes you immortal. You can't choose what body, what gender, what nationality or what age you will gulf next. The people you switch to don't know about this and can't see it coming, their souls just disappear. 
          Only downside is you have to die after 10 years of being in body (the limit for one body is 10y), otherwise it becomes your real one and you become mortal human again. You become a soul traveler by dying and being chosen by God
          
          What do you guys think? Personally I'd be a sucker and might try to write it.