Susuma4ever
I'm planning on writing a new book, a new start and a fresh beginning. Anyone have any suggestions on what type of story I should write??
Susuma4ever
Susuma4ever
Hey guys I wanted to thank you all for reading my book and and voting. I would love some feedback from you. I'm really doing my best to make this a great story so I would love to hear your comments on my story so far. Have a great day and thank you.
lizzkui
Wait.....Su Su? Did you go to Wedgewood? If so, hai! It's Elizabeth ☺
DayDr34mingGirl
Hiii, so I started reading your book and I've read it just wanted to state that it is GREAT I love the idea, but I don't really see where your going with it. I also wanted to add that it said she has panic attacks, however she confronted lexi in front of the whole school. But other than that it was AMAZING!! I LOVED IT! I'm extremely happy. I love your writing style. Side note: The book is very cliché, try and have less cliche things, for example the nerd confronting the girl, the nerd going to hospital, and now raven having a makeover. Add a twist and everything, I definitely see this book making it BIG!!!
DayDr34mingGirl
cliché is when things are overused, so it happens a lot in other stories. You don't have to go back and change it because its really good so far, just later on don't put cliché things in the book, so for example, something cliche would be her ending up with the bad boy but to make it not cliché do something like her ending up with a nerd or the bad boys best friend. I'm not very imaginative, I'm sure you would think of something. Good luck :) but I assure you your book is Amazing!!
Susuma4ever
@DayDr34mingGirl omg thank you so much for your tip. i would really keep on appreciating your tips. and a few things what exactly is cliche and also thanks for pointing out the weird scenes. I will go back and change the things. once again thank you so much.
DayDr34mingGirl
Hii thank you a lot for voting for my book Behind the nerd. It made my day
Susuma4ever
@DayDr34mingGirl your welcome I enjoyed reading your book. I'm publishing my new book called falling to far for him. I hope you can read it and send me tips or feedback. I will appreciate it.