Hey hi, I'm Jenny, I read your story, and I found it really well written!
I wanted to ask you for some advice, your story and mine are not the same from the point of view of the plot, but the themes are more or less similar, I ask you because I noticed that those very few readers who read my story stopped at the prologue, so I was wondering if it was poorly written or if the story lacks potential.
I hope you take the time to check it out, my story is called 'Beg the villain for forgivness', thank you, and a belated happy new year ●//)—(//●