-autumn_

Is "defining love" still on? I've been waiting for it to be over since last year and it's still 12 chapters. So please tell me someone so I would know it's worth waiting.

-autumn_

@SuzanneAugust ok that's great. I actually loved your story "cross country hearts" and I wanted to read this story to.♥️
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SuzanneAugust

@-autumn_ Hi Autumn! Yes! I've actually started writing it again last month. I should finish it next month and I'll start posting again in October or November :)
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Gisela_P

I feel sad to see Cross Country not available anymore here on wattpad. It's one of my favorite stories :(

SuzanneAugust

@Gisela_P Hi Gisela! I'm sad too, BUT while the book is launching at 99 cents on Amazon on October 3rd, I am planning to do a free promotion Oct 8th to Oct 10th. If you click on the link in my profile you can add yourself to my emailing list and on Oct 8th I'll send out an email to let everyone know it's free that weekend!
            
            I'm so glad you love the story!
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writer_maya

I LOVE CROSS COUNTRY. And you are amazing Alex (or maybe sis coz I'm only 16). I really love the way you describe what the characters are feeling and everything about this book is just so beautiful!! The way their relationship turned from a victim and a bully to an understanding couple..I love it an I really do hope that we get to read more books from you. Love you loadsss!!! Stay safe :)

Gisela_P

Hey there! I just wanted to say that I just started reading you book Cross Country and I'm really enjoying it. I really like the idea of driving in another country with someone the MC doesn't like. It's a very interesting one. 

ehl3173

Hi! It's my first time to post a message to anyone here in wattpad. I'm kinda shy doing it but i really wanted to tell you how i love Cross Country. I get this warm feeling when im reading it. I can't bring my phone down though i really have to sleep because im so into that book. I really wanted to befriend June, Jasper, Georgia, Thomas, Lila and Ren. They are so cool.
          
          Lovelots! ❤

SuzanneAugust

@ehl3173 Thank you so much for your message! I love hearing that my readers enjoyed the story. And don't be shy -- I'm definitely not the only writer here who would love to hear your thoughts on Wattpad :)
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SuzanneAugust

@Dreamerswizz15 HI! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm not sure I've ever been asked this question, but I think the best two tips I can give are to write well rounded, dimensional characters and to show, not tell.
          
          When I'm outlining my novel, I always do a character profile for my main characters. I write down their name, age, main role in the book, and I give them whole background stories that may or may not come up in the novel.
          
          I also give them quirks and 3-5 personality traits that I try to stay true to while I write my novel. It also really helps to write down what their internal struggles are (like anxiety) and external struggles are (like for June and Jasper that they had to get to Florida on time for the wedding).
          
          As for showing and not telling -- I feel like descriptions really bring your novel and characters to life. For example, June has anxiety and instead of just saying she's anxious, I try to show that she is. When she's feeling uneasy, I always try to write what her hands are do -- they're either playing with a bag of marshmallows or pulling on her hair, for example. Being able to envision what your characters are doing really brings your story to life.
          
          Not going to lie -- I'm always googling better ways to do these two things and looking for examples. I'm definitely not perfect at either of these but I feel like if we just keep practicing we'll get better!