Nick

@AtNightWeLieAwake Ok, but it might take me a while! Email the first page to me at Nitrokster@gmail.com and I'll send you back what i think would help.  Sound good? 

Hey, earlier you commented on my story (many thanks) and mentioned that I had some, or many, mistakes. You offered to help me edit my story, I'd like to take you up on that offer if that's okay. 
          Let me know. :)

Haha, thank! Hopefully I'll have more up soon, stay tuned!XD

I fanned you!!! :P I really like the sound of that :P