SvnG0d-Luffy
Hey, uhh... Sorry for the long post, but please bear with me if you’re interested.
I’ve red several fanfics across a few platforms (Fanfiction, Wattpad, even AO3) but I’ve yet to come across a timetravel fanfic where Luffy becomes the worst version of himself. So I thought one day to make one fanfiction that does exactly that, and that’s how When the Sun Smiles came to be.
Now that I’ve sorta reread all of my chapters, I’ve found myself questioning how I made Luffy out to be and I worry that you, the readers, might dislike his “edgelord emo” kinda personality.
I really want to know—did you like the way I portray this version of Luffy, or would you have preferred him being a little chill or just outright not be a killer?
Thank you for reading and answering my question. I will read your comments and criticisms to write this story better.
SvnG0d-Luffy
@SvnG0d-Luffy Ah, yes. I did notice how I really wasn’t focusing on the time travel stuff about Luffy, so in my drafted chapters (there’s currently 5 and I’m already writing Water 7 arc) I did add a little more mentions of Luffy’s past, but I was honestly having a very difficult time figuring out when to add some sort of flashback. I’m just gonna wait until Enies Lobby to see how I can integrate the time travel aspect and sneak some flashbacks here and there. Thank you for your response!
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RemmyIsWeird
@SvnG0d-Luffy He good like this. But maybe add more of the time travel aspect to it
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