Swapswap sans

No, no. You're good. If anything. What you wrote was exactly what I wanted to hear. 
            
            But let's get into it.
            
            First, after taking a quick look through your story, I honestly don't see anything wrong with it. See, the thing about reaction fics is, and this is going to sound horrible, but people who love the fandom will read it no matter how many mistakes you make. That's what I've noticed anyway. My Toaru reaction fic was hot garbage in the beginning, even now is still pretty mediocre, but people stuck with it, probably not because they were in awe of my doodoo water writing, but because it was a reaction fic of a character they really, really like, a character that, pretty much, I was the only one doing a reaction fic on. 
            
            That being said, I'm not telling your story sucks. I'm telling you it could always be better. Mine certainly could be. I'm constantly brainstorming ideas on how to make it better, whether that's Grammar and spelling, cool new opening scenes, new takes to dialogue, funny or otherwise, all of that. What I'm trying to say is, don't be disappointed or discouraged. Just keep going in the direction you're going, and more importantly, have fun with it. That is undoubtedly necessary. And if you stop having fun, try to figure out ways to make it fun. That's what I did for some of the Toaru scenes that were a little slow in my opinion. 
            
            All in all, your reactions are nice. Detailed in both scene and summary, so no criticism there. If I was an Undertale fan, I would be ecstatically waiting for you to upload. 
            
            Again, just have fun with it. 
            
            And if your having enough fun, that feeling will catch fire and pull a whole bunch of like-minded enthusiasts over to have fun with you. That's what happened to me anyway.
            
            Anyway, that's all from me, and I hope I didn't sound too condescending.
            
            Have a good day~
            
            :)

@WwEPSILONwW  Lets see well undertale fandom has been around for a very long time. Sadly theres only about one game, this is the first fandom I was very interested in and always have been somehow returning to it as the years past by. One of the reasons was the character sans. The other was the simply wonderous world of undertale.
            
            Well the cool part about it is the fandom started creating their own unique variations of undertale. Mainly centered around sans though also, whole universes dedicated towards the main cast. Known as aus. I found it really interesting to explore the concepts of mainly at(alternative timelines) centered around sans. 
            
            Its a bit uncanon, since these are mainly fanworks. I want to see how the monsters of the underground would react towards mainly the genocide timeline. Along with the different variations of the character of sans resulting from different choices. The main focus would be well what would you do if theres a literal godly being controling their lives?, resetting the world as they see fit and avoiding the consequences. Hence why the main focus would be the skeleton who in the fanworks and the original game has made many unique choices due to this.
            
            Many amazing fights, lore, beautiful animation has been made by the fandom I think that its a shame some of the possible reactions or interactions of the characters haven't been explored. This is also counting the official game. Despite everything this fandom has stuck to me for a very long time. So I want to do something to both exiting, and as to show my appreciation towards all the fun and happy times this fandom has given me.
            
            Wait sorry I didn't realise how long this essay turned out to be apologies. In a way I am inspired to create my own vision and maybe my own au or timeline based on the original.

Well, first. Do something for me. 
            
            Tell me why your reaction fic deserves to be reacted to. This isn’t me mocking you. This is me wondering if you love whatever series you’re using to the point where made a reaction fic for it. Whether you’ll stick with it. What do you want the reactors to see more than anything else? Certain characters doing certain things? Hidden conversations? Fights? That sort of thing. Tell me why you chose your fandom over the other fandoms. 
            
            The reason for making MY reaction fic was simple. For Kamijou, if a stranger was being tortured right in front of him, and if he couldn’t save them, he would ask to swap places. That, at its core, is the reason I decided to use Toaru as my reaction fic. I wanted people to see that kind, borderline insane drive of his. 
            
            So. Tell me about what YOU want to do.