Hello! I am a new reader of yours and this is my constructive criticism. I hope you wont take it badly.
First, it is inspiring to discovered a new rising writer here on wattpad. But you should stop with women degrading part, instead we should uplift and go for women empowerment. I hope you can improve that and do more research about certain things.
I am rooting for you, padayon!
I know you still have a lot of things to learn.
- a new reader of yours artworks.