shaeybooo
Hey, hope you’re doing good. When’s the next update?
Sweet_potatoes21
JamiaEdwards5
Ummm waaa keep mluv???
AnnakayRayner
@Sweet_potatoes21 if you are talking inside the book....the paragraphs are backup points. Some explaining being done. The book ain't FULLy start yet. Just wah jump start.
AnnakayRayner
@Sweet_potatoes21 Tell me if what I changed is now better. Your opinion I would like to hear. Demon thing lol a so di man dem seh when a woman bad.
AnnakayRayner
@Sweet_potatoes21 Thanks. Amma do it right now
AnnakayRayner
Hey You. I been reading your book.loving it. Anyways I pop up. I don't know if this is allowed in here but you know we Jamaicans don't really like following rules.
Let me know know what you think about this if you don't mind.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/363998099?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=AnnakayRayner
Sweet_potatoes21
@AnnakayRayner lollll, it better and yeah i understand a so man call oman demon when dem bad
Sweet_potatoes21
@AnnakayRayner ty bby, about ur book, ur summary is quite interesting abt the ml and FL but for me personally I'm no a fan of the demon thing n stuff ( me n my opinion) and most readers would scroll through ur book say "too much paragraph n word" it would be smoother if u put in some space. Just like my book, it has sentence, space, paragraph... Let me know if u get an understanding of what I'm saying but, ur book is quite interesting.
Sweet_potatoes21
I changed the Characters pictures, check them out!
Sweet_potatoes21
Hey everyone, my friend here is a new writer, just like me and I'm asking if y'all can give her some support and check out her first book. ❤
https://www.wattpad.com/story/357301301
TT_555
Nah lie ur book good but there are some mistakes…anyway mi love it mn….I hope u post more chapters hun
