@SweetyKim3
Me : DEAD
PEACH AND ME - Episode 1: William & Est kissed.
Cancel all my plans because I'm going to replay that scene a hundred times. Sleep ?? Never heard of it Est must be so proud that William is eating his heart shaped lips WHY DID I TYPE THAT?? AAAAAA
Hi, I have another suggestion (yeah yeah I know it's annoying )
Now the chapters are much smoother, only lacking some breathing space.
Like in this chapter, three main incidents are happening - three dreams and parallel fight.
First Est in dream. He escaped and the fight followed.
Immediate after, Lego's dream and the following incidents appeared and so on. At this point readers are kind of running.
I suggest, for these type of continuous sequence or whenever the scenes are changing, add some extra space/a line devider etc. that way you won't have to explain which timeline/space we are in like "in Lego's dream..." Or "back in real world..." and the readers will get some more time to absorb the essence of the last section.
I feel with this small and simple update your story telling will become stronger and the reading won't feel like a task.
Thanks for bearing with my free advices
@CyreneEl thank you so much ❤️ I really appreciate you taking the time to point this out. That's actually a great suggestion & I'll definitely try adding more spacing or dividers between scene changes in future chapters.
I tried to tell this in comment section but Wattpad was being Wattpad and I lost my patience.
Hello, Westies ❤️ I'm so excited to announce that my new story is finally out - Witchveil: Love Beyond the Veil.
The Prologue & Chapter 1 are now published, If you enjoy mystery, fantasy, witches and magic i hope you'll give it a chance. Every mystery has a reason and every secret will be revealed little by little.
Go check it out and let me know what you think ?
Your comments, votes & support mean so much to me and motivate me to keep writing. Thank you for always supporting my stories.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/410954348
Hey author! I scrolled through x, qnd saw someone asking for a ffc, where est is sassy, and saw someone having a screenshot of "kidnap me love me" so I recommended chamma too.
Your work is truly amazing ❤️
@music_addicted_ Honestly, when i started writing "Kidnap Me, Love Me" actually i never expected anyone would love it this much because I think it's so silly and fun to me and i mentioned about my fav in this like the pokemon & boba. It still surprises me in the best way. And Thank you so much for the Post.
@ SweetyKim3 @ music_addicted_ here, ill upload in my last story so you can see rhen ill delete it
Hey,
Just wanted to ask — do you have an X account?
I post fanfiction reviews and recommendations on mine, and I was wondering if you'd be okay with me tagging your stories when I share them. I really enjoy your work and would love to help more readers find it.
Totally fine if you'd rather not — just wanted to ask first out of respect.
Let me know what you think. Thanks for everything you write!
Thank you so much for the sweet response — and for being so generous about it! ❤️
I'll definitely tag you when I share your stories, with a short summary and direct link, just as I do for others. Your work deserves all the love.
And no worries at all about not having an X account — I'll make sure credit is super clear.
Keep writing, queen. You're amazing!
How many parts left to dragon bond
How many chapter are left in "CHAMAA"?
how many part left in until you lose control?
Hi, I really liked your book "Heir of Flames, Heart of Rain" and I have a question, can I translate it into Polish? Of course, I would specify that it's not my book, but yours.
I can translate your novels into Arabic and mention you.
