Sword_king_19
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https://www.wattpad.com/story/234316371
Sword_king_19
Dat1Otako
*jumps down*
Hello there!
HonestFiction95
Good, you added an image! It is also great that you introduced the characters.But maybe you should put the readers in context before developing the plot. Don’t forget you are not obliged to make the storytelling linear. I tend to use flashbacks because that way you can link everything if later you come up with new ideas. Many people love the stories about mythical swords, so why not a flashback about it? JUST MY SILLY PERSONAL OPINION OF COURSE!
NeiaSky
Thanks for voting and adding the black and white clovers, and I am open to any suggestions if you have any, once again thank you so much
HonestFiction95
Hi!! Thanks for adding my story! I see no information about you but we have some stories in common, so I hope you enjoy!!
HonestFiction95
@ HonestFiction95 Try to find an image. Even if you draw it yourself. And I would write a more detailed description. Bear in mind that's what will attract the readers in the first place.
