pepperpie27
Hi there0^◇^0)/thank you for adding 'Mom' to your reading list...
SydneyTook
spArrowtree
Thanks for following!
SydneyTook
@beingcheesy No problem, I liked it :)
beingcheesy
Hey there....:D
Thanks for adding my story to your reading list. I truly appreciate it.
Hope you are having a great day....:))
SydneyTook
@betheljss I read Pentoeia, it was pretty great! And there was some useful parts I kept in mind for my writing, thanks :)
betheljss
I'm so glad to know that! :D Thank you so much and keep on writing! :D I'd be cheering you on!! :D wohoo!
MysteryDance
Thanks for the follow :)
God bless.
SydneyTook
HELP!
I'm in the middle of writing a chapter that's built around a sword fight, but don't know enough to write it well.
Any advice? Or reference to where I could learn more for this? :P
spArrowtree
It sounds cliched, but I would say to imagine yourself in the sword fight. What you see, what you feel, how you move, what you hear. I would also caution starting too many sentences with "I", depending on which tense you use. Experiment with what sounds good! That's really the only way!
betheljss
@sydneyhcs that sounds exciting! ^_^ I wrote some sword fighting scenes in Pentoria in some of the chapters so I guess you'd see that soon :P oh, and what I do is that I mostly inspire myself in some movies and anime that have sword fighting :D It's the best inspiration I could get! haha! Oh, and also of course I read some books that have fighting scenes to =) it makes me get some idea of what words and verbs people use =) hope this helps ^_^ (wow my comment seems long)
SydneyTook
No problem, I'm looking forward to reading it =)
betheljss
Hay! =) thanks for adding "PENTORIA" to your reading list too! ^_^ It's a real encouragement!! I've worked hard on that story so I really hope you'd enjoy it! ^_^
SydneyTook
@betheljss Absolutely I'll check out your other story, it might take me a while because I have around ten books I'm currently tackling. But when I do, I'll let you know :)