SylenaValen

Hello friends! Huge question I’m pondering. 
          	
          	What if my story began with Chapter 2, rather than chapter 1? What are your thoughts?

SylenaValen

That is what I was thinking! I was getting insecure  But I do believe this is a great way to say “this story is not for the faint of heart”
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dollymortuary

I like it as it is! Chapter 1 introduces us to how powerful Nina truly is and also what her power is used for. Personally, I think it’s a strong start and helps inform the reader of what’s to come/what Nina has been through. But that’s just what me thinks, either or could work !! 
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SylenaValen

Hello friends! Huge question I’m pondering. 
          
          What if my story began with Chapter 2, rather than chapter 1? What are your thoughts?

SylenaValen

That is what I was thinking! I was getting insecure  But I do believe this is a great way to say “this story is not for the faint of heart”
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dollymortuary

I like it as it is! Chapter 1 introduces us to how powerful Nina truly is and also what her power is used for. Personally, I think it’s a strong start and helps inform the reader of what’s to come/what Nina has been through. But that’s just what me thinks, either or could work !! 
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DefinitelyAHumanMale

I see you've been busy!!!
          
          Can't wait to dig in!!! But I will... I read fast and need it to last when I get to it!!
          
          Loved that first bit I read already!!!
          
          I have a lot of reading to catch up on in the writing discord server, but then I will read all that you wrote!!!
          
          You should share "The Flame Within" in the server for the rest of them to come check it out!!!

SylenaValen

Thank you! I just finished my semester and finals  I will be more engaged on the server. 
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