Zachoar

Hey Ryan I just finished the first part of my story and wondered if you could give me some feedback.

Zachoar

@Zachoar "Ya damn greenbean" Argo Shaw to Caesar any day of the week
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Synarus

@Zachoar haha I did  actually I love it XD
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Zachoar

@Zachoar Thanks for the feedback, I broke up the dialogue to make it more readable, i'm working on the 2nd part. P.s did you read my descrption.
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