Syns-to-Ink

Hey! So it's been a long time since I've used this account, and even longer since I've tried my hand at writing. 
          	
          	I'm going to try and finish the story I once started. 
          	
          	Since it's been so long since I last wrote and I know my writing needs a lot of help,  any advice, criticisms or help would be appreciated. There's only one chapter so far but willing to the same in return if anybody is interested. Thanks!

Syns-to-Ink

@pomalo_ Hey! Yes, I remember you!  It has been a really long time. I hope you're doing well! 
          	  Sure, that'd be amazing. If you have any kind of advice or help to give, I'll take it!
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pomalo_

@Syns-to-Ink heyy welcome back it's been so long! Idk if you remember, but we once got paired up from a book club and I was really enjoying your book. Feel free to message me if you need any help or advice ^^
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Syns-to-Ink

Hey! So it's been a long time since I've used this account, and even longer since I've tried my hand at writing. 
          
          I'm going to try and finish the story I once started. 
          
          Since it's been so long since I last wrote and I know my writing needs a lot of help,  any advice, criticisms or help would be appreciated. There's only one chapter so far but willing to the same in return if anybody is interested. Thanks!

Syns-to-Ink

@pomalo_ Hey! Yes, I remember you!  It has been a really long time. I hope you're doing well! 
            Sure, that'd be amazing. If you have any kind of advice or help to give, I'll take it!
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pomalo_

@Syns-to-Ink heyy welcome back it's been so long! Idk if you remember, but we once got paired up from a book club and I was really enjoying your book. Feel free to message me if you need any help or advice ^^
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Syns-to-Ink

If I was reading and following your book and haven't voted on recent updates, just let me know. The new updates destroyed my library and can't find any of the books I was reading.

Syns-to-Ink

@13reezy thanks I'll get around to it : )
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13reezy_

@Syns-to-Ink ;)
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tomgaryens

Do you have a discord account?

tomgaryens

Yayyy! Add me tomgaryens#8367
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Syns-to-Ink

@tomgaryens Okie dokie. I downloaded it. Just gotta figure out how to use it now
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tomgaryens

I think you should. You can also join servers on discord, like a group chat with multiple chatrooms tho I have nothing to recommend you now. But it'll be easier for me to discuss stuffs there, cause I don't want to spill spoilers XD
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tomgaryens

You're right about Sr. being a Gryffindor! XD Congratulations! But may I know why you put him there?

tomgaryens

@Syns-to-Ink That's true, and I never lie with narratives. Such as, if I mentioned clearly- with no ambiguity -that someone's dead, then they're dead. They wouldn't make a surprise comeback at any given chapter. Lying in your narratives (I mean not someone lying while being in-character) would make the readers believe less in what you write. Yea their birth dates, their names, even the hair/eye color. I am a graphic design student, so I'm like academically and professionally trained that if you put something in your work it has to mean something. That could come across as weird to some people XD
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Syns-to-Ink

@tomgaryens of course. I could do with a reread anyways. I was meaning to anyway to back up my own theory on Olivia. Which is not an affair. I feel he's loyal- and like you said,  honorable for that. 
            And I can tell. I love that their quirks mean something. It has me playing jigsaw with them.  In my opinion, it's what makes it such a great story
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tomgaryens

@Syns-to-Ink Omg true true. You know what, can I take that offer on you commenting from the 1st chapter? XD Since you seem to see through him so deeply, and I'd like to hear other opinions aside from how ppl think he's having an affair with Olivia and all. Pretty please? and I really don't think it's a character flaw at all❤. I created my characters with loads of layers and symbolisms, even my beta reader was amused by that XD I just. every single thing of them cannot be random, it has to represent something. Even their birth dates!
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