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let's start over. with totally new stories, and totally new hearts <3

Hey guys! I'm starting a new story called Flu. It's about a vaccination that kills people rather than saving them, and a government conspiracy! Any ways, any help would be much appreciated! ^.^ thanks friends!

Posted a new chapter for "places to Hide!" Would love some feedback :) 
          I'm also working on an update for "best song ever" so sorry to those of you who have read it. :) it will be up soon!

Oh! And I also updated "best song ever!" :)

Hey guys!! I've been trying to circulate through each story so I just posted a new chapter in PLACES TO HIDE!
          Please comment and vote 

Just updated "best song ever!" Chapter two! Please read and comment because I value everyone's opinions! Thank you guys so much and let me know what I can do for you guys!

@trinnywin060902 thanks lovey! I really appreciate the input! I will make sure to read your stuff today when I get a moment!

Read all 3 of your stories, and I love the descriptions for some areas! Keep it up!
          A thing to work on is maybe check some speech marks, cuz you only put one speech mark in at some points. For morons, like me, that can be confusing :p
          Overall, I like the storylines, and you were very detailed with writing! You earned a follower :D
          ^^

Really sick of authors saying that will take the time to read your stories if you read theirs. Don't lie, bro. It's hard enough getting people to even glance at your stuff on this site, so there's no need to manipulate people into reading your stuff and not have the common curtesy to return the favor when you say you will.

I'm working on a scifi story right now. Just posting a few love stories in the mean time to build an audience :)