TBThomsen

Hey guys :)
          	
          	I have a new story for you. I'll give you a chapter at least once a week. You don't have to worry about if I suddenly stop udating because I have writer's block or something like that. The story is finished on my computer.
          	My favorite characters from my story Monster pops up in this story but you don't have to read Monster to follow this story, so don't worry :) Monster is a dark story so it's not for everyone.
          	
          	Happy reading and much love to you all.
          	
          	Tina.

TBThomsen

Hey guys :)
          
          I have a new story for you. I'll give you a chapter at least once a week. You don't have to worry about if I suddenly stop udating because I have writer's block or something like that. The story is finished on my computer.
          My favorite characters from my story Monster pops up in this story but you don't have to read Monster to follow this story, so don't worry :) Monster is a dark story so it's not for everyone.
          
          Happy reading and much love to you all.
          
          Tina.

TBThomsen

Hello all :) 
          I'm in the proces of posting my very first story here on wattpad. It would be amazing if you want to take a look at it. I have 5 chapters ready to publish :) So I hope you would take a quick look at it and tell me what you think.
          
          TBThomsen

TBThomsen

@ Hayleighwhite18  okay I'll take a look at your story :) and thank you for your response. I'll work on the descriptions :) 
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Hayleighwhite18

@TBThomsen You're story has promise but it needs more descriptions. It needs to draw the reader in and right now the reader is probably confused. I'm going through the same process of being more descriptive with emotions. If you need some ideas my story is Called Loving The Broken and I'm happy to help you. 
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