TBThomsen

Hey, awesome readers :) My stories need a LOT of editing, lol. I've grown as a writer since I uploaded my stories so I'm editing the stories as fast as I can. PLease be patient :) Much love to you all. Tina.

TBThomsen

Hello all :) 
          I'm in the proces of posting my very first story here on wattpad. It would be amazing if you want to take a look at it. I have 5 chapters ready to publish :) So I hope you would take a quick look at it and tell me what you think.
          
          TBThomsen

TBThomsen

@ Hayleighwhite18  okay I'll take a look at your story :) and thank you for your response. I'll work on the descriptions :)
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Hayleighwhite18

@TBThomsen You're story has promise but it needs more descriptions. It needs to draw the reader in and right now the reader is probably confused. I'm going through the same process of being more descriptive with emotions. If you need some ideas my story is Called Loving The Broken and I'm happy to help you.
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