@TGR20-16 I saw that! I appreciate you checking into it, as that story leans more towards contemporary romance and is quite different from TS. Let me edit "Fate" before you proceed. Your feedback will show up in the right sections whenever you leave any. I have substantially changed my writing style and will end up removing all inline comments after I have edited the chapters. In the first week of December, I will start editing the chapters. As for TS, the entire storyline has been completely rewritten offline. Therefore, when I start showcasing the new storyline, all of the current chapters will be unpublished. Much more editing and condensing remains. Haha. Life as a writer.