Okay so boom , first impressions on “ How did we get here? “ * love it so far ! In my perspective you can slightly see what’s gonna happen throughout this book & how it’s gonna end but honestly can get a different outcome at the end ( if that made sense ) .
My recommendations are add fast forwards or time frames that fits into the plot of the story ( optional ) , your details in the story so far is good ! but if you want to give it more realistic value as i can say … change the layouts , like if someone likes someone story or comment you can put something like “ : @______ liked your story “ it doesn’t have to be exactly like that but like get creative with it you know ( optional ) , also add in like a section where all the information of the book is there but don’t spill , like disclaimers , add a little note , maybe a theme that connects to the book etc , getting detailed & creative with your story really brings out your story & catches attention <3
Overall , you’re doing good ! I’m enjoying it already , especially since it’s starting off with something interesting ( drama ) , i’m looking forward to more updates soon , i will be looking out <3