THEEG0ATT

Chapter 7/8 for a mothers day special???!!

niy1nkz

Okay so boom , first impressions on “ How did we get here? “ * love it so far ! In my perspective you can slightly see what’s gonna happen throughout this book & how it’s gonna end but honestly can get a different outcome at the end ( if that made sense ) .
          
          My recommendations are add fast forwards or time frames that fits into the plot of the story ( optional ) , your details in the story so far is good ! but if you want to give it more realistic value as i can say … change the layouts , like if someone likes someone story or comment you can put something like “  : @______ liked your story “ it doesn’t have to be exactly like that but like get creative with it you know ( optional ) , also add in like a section where all the information of the book is there but don’t spill , like disclaimers , add a little note , maybe a theme that connects to the book etc , getting detailed & creative with your story really brings out your story & catches attention <3
          
          Overall , you’re doing good ! I’m enjoying it already , especially since it’s starting off with something interesting ( drama ) , i’m looking forward to more updates soon , i will be looking out <3

THEEG0ATT

@niy1nkz Aww thank you Niy, that means a lot fr. I appreciate you taking the time to read and give feedback, it really helps me grow as a writer. And it’s nice to meet you too <3 I’m excited to keep updating and seeing what you think.
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niy1nkz

@slutz4ry Np hun & thank you so much !!! I’m so happy that i inspired you to make stories/books of your own , you’re doing great !!! I’ll continue to keep up as you update so i can keep leaving feedback for you . & Hiii Mariah nice to meet you , i’m Taniyah but i go by Niy for short <3
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THEEG0ATT

@niy1nkz Thank you again for the feedback, fr. I really appreciate how you break things down you’re one of the writers who actually inspired me to start writing in the first place. I love your books, so hearing your thoughts means a lot.
            btw my name’s Mariah, I never said it before.~M
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