THEVINCENTNOAH

To those who have read "the jock just wants the prep" and said it was bad lmao; what is it that makes it that exactly? 
          	
          	Is there anything that I can improve on?
          	
          	Were there plot holes or was in just bad?
          	
          	Please reply and comment below so I can see what I can do to make it better

offgunsrose

@THEVINCENTNOAH Idk who said that but it's one of my favorite books
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THEVINCENTNOAH

To those who have read "the jock just wants the prep" and said it was bad lmao; what is it that makes it that exactly? 
          
          Is there anything that I can improve on?
          
          Were there plot holes or was in just bad?
          
          Please reply and comment below so I can see what I can do to make it better

offgunsrose

@THEVINCENTNOAH Idk who said that but it's one of my favorite books
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THEVINCENTNOAH

Sorry, to everyone reading "the jock just wants the nerd - 2" i added an extra paragraph to help tie some connections together and make a bit more sense in chapter 70.
          
          If you want a bit more of hidden lore, you can refresh the book (hopefully it appears and works) and reread it.

THEVINCENTNOAH

Lol, I really wanna write as much so I can cant to the "interesting" point of the "The jock wants the nerd"
          
          You guys are definitely gonna be shocked and hate me for it :)
          
          It'll be a roller coaster of sad emotions.

THEVINCENTNOAH

@CarterNation it might reach up to a hundred just like the other one. I'm not very sure. I really want to end it quickly, but if it needs more context it might be longer.
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CarterNation

@THEVINCENTNOAH Um not quite sure I understand your commet compared to mine buuuttt okkaayy :). How many more chapters are you thinking about doing?
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THEVINCENTNOAH

@CarterNation ah, it's fairly understandable. I appreciate the concern.
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THEVINCENTNOAH

Does anyone even play the music at the beginning of the chapter?

Aathep

Of kors
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Miguelardo

@CHIBITIGAR o I listened to the music while reading the chapter
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THEVINCENTNOAH

He everyone who is following me or reading my stuff, I'm here to say that I'm thinking of doing some major reworks to "the jock just wants the prep" i wanted to do this for a while but was concerned for a few dumb reasons, but I decided to make this decision to make it "better"
          
          I'm gonna be rewriting certain chapters such as chapter 38 which is unnecessary lewd and can be addressed differently. Stuff like that, I apologize because the comments written on paragraphs that would be reworded would disappear afterwards which might result to confusion for new readers.
          
          Anyways, I hope this doesn't cause an issue.

Kuribohking15

As long as it makes you happy
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