TIMEMASTER101

What are your thoughts on the new story "On the Road Once More"?

kirk1898

@TIMEMASTER101 I would love too man but as you can see I got my hands tied Im going to my college soon so I will be pretty busy
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kirk1898

@TIMEMASTER101 it's amazing the story is good but there is something that bothers me a little about Dean he is not like his usual like Sarcastic bad boy exterior like from What I read he is a bit robotic like the way he talks and act Sam is okay he is just as he is the sane one in the duo who is in Dean BS also the premise where they meet 049 it's is good the fight scene is awesome but I felt like there should be more like for example Sam and that lady girl was Captured by 049 by a tranquilizer and being strap on while captured Sam ask 049 questions while giving time for Dean to find him and the lady survivor because he is an Overprotective self sacrifice brother but overall I will give it a solid 8/10
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TIMEMASTER101

@kirk1898 
          	  
          	  If you are a big fan of both. Lets try helping each other if you like
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TIMEMASTER101

What are your thoughts on the new story "On the Road Once More"?

kirk1898

@TIMEMASTER101 I would love too man but as you can see I got my hands tied Im going to my college soon so I will be pretty busy
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kirk1898

@TIMEMASTER101 it's amazing the story is good but there is something that bothers me a little about Dean he is not like his usual like Sarcastic bad boy exterior like from What I read he is a bit robotic like the way he talks and act Sam is okay he is just as he is the sane one in the duo who is in Dean BS also the premise where they meet 049 it's is good the fight scene is awesome but I felt like there should be more like for example Sam and that lady girl was Captured by 049 by a tranquilizer and being strap on while captured Sam ask 049 questions while giving time for Dean to find him and the lady survivor because he is an Overprotective self sacrifice brother but overall I will give it a solid 8/10
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TIMEMASTER101

@kirk1898 
            
            If you are a big fan of both. Lets try helping each other if you like
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TIMEMASTER101

Greetings my fellow readers.
          
          Since Dec 20, I decided to create another story based on the TV show I recently finished watching last November named Supernatural.
          
          The story is called “On the Road Once More”
          
          It is more like a side quest compared to the main one “First Light of a New Age” which I am mostly focusing on. This story I have made is just for fun and I hope you enjoy
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406357478?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=TIMEMASTER101

TIMEMASTER101

Several more chapters left and we finally get to see Maximo's POV soon.
          
          Vote and comment on newest chapters and we might get to that part very sooner

LEGENDFRIENDSMOBA

Finally lol i might be interested the series again to see what happens to my boi XD and F for him in advance i bet alot of mind breaking stuff probably
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TIMEMASTER101

Be prepared, my fellpw readers. The next chapter will be one of the most complicated thing I have ever created.
          
          I have to explain with the most scientific and magical philosophical thing I could that make your little human brains melt because this is going to be some LOTM shït later

Temp942

Okay author
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LEGENDFRIENDSMOBA

Hehe can't wait for it lol
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ledled_qt3

@TIMEMASTER101 we'll be waiting, congrats on surviving the final exam btw.
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Capttitan2005

Also transferring my comments to that chapter while I type them in the latest chap.

Capttitan2005

@TIMEMASTER101 already done.
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TIMEMASTER101

@Capttitan2005 
            
            Put the same comments on the paragraphs you commented on
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