@MaddisonCouch3 Hey Maddison, thanks for your message. Unfortunately, i'm on a strict deadline with my writing schedule so I don't have any capacity to give structured feedback at the moment. I will add it to my list though, and once i've finished writing book 2 of the KoC series - I will give it a read :-)
In the meantime, I highly recommend that you join a book club here on wattpad :-) Its a great way to receive structured feedback from like-minded writers. Simply type 'book club' into the search function and you will find a whole raft of clubs to choose from. Each club will have different application processes, but i'm sure you will find something great. Good luck and stay in touch :-)