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Hey guys and gals, if you read "the reason I'm taking a break from updating my book" I am doing this because I recently was told that a good and close friend of mine killed himself today. I found out from another close friend of mine that the police and EMS had found him dead in his apartment. I will not specify how he did it. He'd struggled with depression for a while but no one really suspected him to do anything like this mainly because he was super positive and nice towards other people

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Hey guys and gals, if you read "the reason I'm taking a break from updating my book" I am doing this because I recently was told that a good and close friend of mine killed himself today. I found out from another close friend of mine that the police and EMS had found him dead in his apartment. I will not specify how he did it. He'd struggled with depression for a while but no one really suspected him to do anything like this mainly because he was super positive and nice towards other people

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Posted two parts of my first book and they're short but then again I've never written before. I'm giving it a try and would like to know what you guys think. What I should get rid of and what I should fix
          Opinions are appreciated