LazarusJack99

Hey TJ I got some news for you. See I won't be in wattpad for a while because right now the app is having some minor issues and I have to study for an test next week, so If your planning to update more chapters next week or you want me check it out before you publish it I won't be available till the week after so yeah. Sorry about this

TJH16005

@AlexanderHamilton594 
            It's fine, good look on the test.
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LazarusJack99

Thx for following me 

LazarusJack99

@AlexanderHamilton594 well that's sound like a good idea but....make sure that his not too cold, I really like him to passion about eccuality and justice about the rights and wrong, I know that sounds a bit childlish but I really like if he was like that and try not to be too hard on them especially his team and Ruby. I think they can accept him who he is they just need time to proses but as for the other I was thinking their gonna be hard to for them to proses. Like Blake for instance, she of all people can understand why he did what he did and maybe in this story she and him can start to be friends since they hardly interact with each other 
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TJH16005

@AlexanderHamilton594 
            Well, he doesn't hate them he just used them as necessary tools for his cover. The only thing he dislikes about them are their attitudes towards fighting and killing as he knows that they will have to kill someone at some point in their life and their obliviousness to that irritates him. But while he does care for them in some way he doesn't see them as real friends as they became friends with his act at Beacon not his true self, but if they could accept who he really is then maybe they could be.
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LazarusJack99

NPR, CFVY and RWBY 
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LazarusJack99

Hey names Alex and I've been reading your work for a while now and it's interesting so far but I have to ask, why are you making slow updates on in? If you don't mind me asking 

LazarusJack99

Wait is this Saphron before or after the death
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TJH16005

@AlexanderHamilton594 
            I'm thinking of adding Saphron in Sidon get an intermission after this chapter. But she'll be shock and angry at Jaune because he altered the news she got about their family and believed that he was dead.
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LazarusJack99

Not bad this can be a great for the next update. It's good to hear from for a while and I was thinking something about Jaune's past, I watched RWBY about a week ago and they finally showed one of Jaune's sister Saphron or something like was her name and she has a child name Adrian and wife name ter. How about you add the two characters in the theater. Also can you make a chapter where shad shows how Jaune's family were killed by Jerome and shows his beserk mode to the audience. I want them to think twice about pissing him off and make sure the two children are protected by the scene, they wouldn't want to see their father/uncle being a monster 
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BJack998

That's a lot of thank you's from your part that I'm not sure if I have to sing your welcome from Moana.

TJH16005

@BJack998 
            Appreciate it.
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BJack998

Good cuz my singing sucks.
            Curiosity killed the gatto but I'm thinking about it but right now. I'll  have them of hosts for now if I feel like adding them then you'll be first to know. Pinky promise 
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TJH16005

@BJack998 
            No need to do that but I'm glad I was able to help.
            And I'm curious will we by any chance be seeing them watch pirates of the Caribbean.
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