Thomas Kistner

I am back guys

Hey guys. So my birthday is coming up and I'm wondering if you have any complaints about starlight Unfallen.

Hey guys I put up all I currently have for Starlight Unfallen. If you want this to be more interesting than it is now, then give me ideas, advice, criticism, even telling me to take something out will help. 
          
          I am going to try this and see whether I will do it more.
          
          In the book Selina is engaged to Fil, after the fight is she:
          A) killed in the battle trying to protect the city
          B) Taken alive for information then killed in front of Fil
          C) Taken hostage to get the princess back
          D) Makes it out alive and manages to find the trail of the Rhino

Hey guys rewriting Starlight and feel better about it. So comment what your thoughts are about it so far and please reply

Hey guys posted the newest version of chapter 1 for the new starlight. Please read and give me your own personal thoughts on it.

So I am thinking of rewriting Starlight. I will put more information involving characters in the new book, more information, better descriptions of the character, more dialogue, and also anything you guys suggest I do. So anything you guys want to see in the new book?

@RyanDeSilva49 I will and please read any of mine and comment what you think

Hey guys, yes I realize I am essentially only working on Starlight. It seems everyone is looking at it more than any of the other ones. 
          Since I am guessing people are reading it, please message me on your thoughts about the progress.

Does anyone have anything they want to say about the books so far?

Hey, thanks for the follow!