TMKnight

I wanted to send these to you a week ago, but there were some setbacks.

What's up brother, here bothering me, I mean bringing some images and an idea for him Toren.
          
          Image designed.
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/e8/fe/08/e8fe082a36b8f3ae2266605635d5ab1f.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/44/66/b2/4466b26779b9261981e384c0a18e194e.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/dd/12/12/dd121287439a1721f277b32b47d9ec26.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/2a/86/b5/2a86b51d2fa00290df23da73e697c1ed.jpg
          
          Note from me: they are the same image, but with different Coloring, there Toren you have so many styles ha, ha, ha.
          
          The idea: well, I'll tell you, this occurred to me when I was watching a movie with my nephew and I liked the weapon used by the villain, I found it fascinating a cannon that can shoot plasma and aether, well you might wonder how Toren can develop an aether prime energy plasma cannon Toren would have to learn the Djinn technique where he influences the aether to give it the shape of sabers and then over time Toren begins to experiment trying to give them different shapes like hammers, swords, spears, battle gloves completed etc.

Cannon image:
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/46/08/98/4608986bd677a7b8a01f17b49a7413ed.jpg
          
          Note: the best I could find, but to be honest I tried to make one by AI, but it didn't work out, what I had in mind was similar, just add a Phoenix head and you have to change it to spikes or quills with feathers.
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Df5NqmuuZ1Q&t=1s
          (watch at 1.04)
          
          In this fight I couldn't help but feel sorry for Toren beating up a dragon and another thing, how brutal the hammer is, wouldn't it be exciting if in a moment of anger Toren used a war hammer to get out some frustration, to be honest sometimes it's better to hit than to cut off his head and maybe these videos will give you an idea for a fight with Toren and a dragon.
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e4_dms4xBGs
          (watch full or 0.20 to 1.10)
          In itself, this cannon can be used for long-distance attacks and as a shield to stop melee attacks and you must use it to hit an enemy.
          
          Effects of receiving an attack from this cannon.
          
          — Plasma shots can cause soul damage. (normal)
          
          —Burn causes a very painful effect (it's not the best name, but it works) even if the wound is closed or the flesh is healed without any wound or scar, the pain will remain, since the soul was burned causing it to suffer constant pain. (lethal)
          
          —Consumption, unlike burn, acts more like an infection and a candle (this depends more on Toren if he really wants to kill his enemy, if he wants to use lethal ammunition or mortal ammunition) when he shoots it hits it begins to consume the victim's mana, but the mana is not the only one affected, since the life force is also attacked, it begins to be consumed slowly like a candle when it is lit, in this process the affected person manifests spots that have the shape of cracks (the cracks shine orange red with hints of purple) that begin to spread throughout the victim's body until it is completely consumed.

My note: I know it's very OP, but I'm just giving ideas, in the end it all depends on you, but the end.
          
          By this point you should have realized that the hand cannon is a weapon designed to deal with (kill) the asuras or rather the desire or desperation to have more power.
          
          Effects on the characters in the world of TBATE.
          
          Myre Indrath: she could be shocked by the damage of the wounds of the surviving dragon and more with the corpse of another, dragons, since the wounds they showed were very unusual, in addition to what type of art or weapon.
          
          kezess indrath: I think she would start to see Toren as a real threat and more for the fact that he is showing qualities of handling the aether that are not seen.
          
          Mordain: well here I don't know if Mordain would be more indecisive, since Toren developed something that is capable of giving true death in itself, something that can destroy the soul.
          
          Rinia: Rinia seeing the future seeing Toren how beautiful (in itself she saw Toren even more or seeing an Angel).
          
          Last: you know me, imagine a scene, Don Arthur asks Mordain about Toren, asking him if he knows what world Toren comes from.
          At the beginning Mordain would be silent thinking whether to tell him or not, but in the end Mordain would reveal that he does not know what world Toren comes from, but he speculates that Toren comes from a cardinal world or origin world.
          
          That it is a world where other worlds are created, in itself the inhabitants of the cardinal worlds are beings capable of unconsciously creating worlds.
          
          In short, divine beings
          
          Explaining that Toren is one, and that is why Toren is capable of growing very fast, since his soul comes from that world.
          
          And that is why he is loved and hated by the world, because it is an unpredictable variant that can cause good or bad events.

I wanted to ask, I know that Discordant note is an AU but will the ending be similar to tbate’s canon ending (whenever Tbate’s novel ends)

Hello brother, I am curious about how dangerous Toren is, since I know that Mordain wants Toren to be with them and not go out into the world, well, it does not surprise me, since Toren should not be here.
          Let's be honest, among the three original reincarnated who are destined to come to this world, they are already considered anomalies, beings capable of changing the world, the Seris mass said so, so what is Toren? (In my opinion Toren is a calamity that can turn the tables or alter the result for good or evil).
          
          But he did consider Toren much more dangerous than the three original reincarnated.
          
          I wonder what Mordain has seen so as not to teach Toren about the soul.
          
          And by the way, happy new year ha, ha, ha.
          
          Here I leave you an image that I liked
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/80/e3/fa/80e3fa280d77b3485b9ec663087c6b6d.jpg

How are you, dear author, I'm back to bother you, ha, ha, ha (evil laugh).
          
          I want to ask you about Toren, well, more accurately, about his soul. I'm curious, since his growth in power is abnormal, even for reincarnated people, he adapted quickly to the world, but well, he had previous knowledge and help from an asura to help him, etc.
          
          But the end, what I could understand, is that Toren's soul world will be the path that Toren will take to become stronger, it's like creating a world inside his soul, shaping it according to his emotions or will.
          
          In itself, it has a lot of potential and I wouldn't be surprised if Toren became a god (ha, ha, ha, Fate wouldn't like that, don't you believe that).
          
          Image how I imagine Toren's soul world later on.
          https://img.kwcdn.com/product/fancy/ea25cb02-b544-404b-a706-b9f79580ae75.jpg?imageView2/2/w/800/q/70/format/webp
          
          Pictures of Phoenix's will.
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/e4/46/e9/e446e9087aaef5c30f8e07dafa305496.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/71/4d/55/714d55bae8b8ccffdfc636d65208c7be.jpg
          
          I found this image and I liked it, just ignore the horns.
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/564x/7c/9f/27/7c9f27a7c1289b6fb1388550a68ef230.jpg
          
          I have a question later on, in this story will there be a moment when Toren will be so angry that he will eliminate the soul of the enemy he is facing and if Aurora will stop him from crossing that line.
          
          By the way, good ones, chapter up, I didn't expect the last part of this chapter that you recently uploaded.

Example of how Toren can extract Souls.
          
          In the world of TBATE every living being has some aether torren could use this aether as an anchor to hold the soul to extract the soul of a living being.
          
          Example
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbL-7SKeB6E
          
          Minute 1:55 appears Toren facing asuras or specters or anything that hinders his path.
          
          Minute 2:40 to 2:52 (moment of the harvest hahaha :) ) Toren extracts the Souls of the specters or asuras (dragons) sent to kill Toren.
          
          What do you think?
          It will be good to read a scene where Toren extracts the souls and then see the leaders of each side, see kezess and Agrona see the powers that Toren has acquired through a recording.

I have some questions and doubts.
          
          1- In the future, will Toren harm Agrona physically or mentally?
          —Well, in my opinion, Toren cuts off one or both of Agrona's arms (with a Soul attack) losing them definitively with the consequence of not being able to control his mana correctly, but enough for him to continue living, this would be done by Toren as revenge for having had Lady Dawn pick on him and stealing his freedom from her.
          
          Possible phrase that Toren can say when he faces Agrona, he gets what he deserves, Phrase: Toren = death is something merciful for you Agrona, just like what you did with my mother, I will take away what you value most (mana or better yet, her control over it).
          
          The end Toren cuts off Agrona's arms, leaving Agrona without arms and making it difficult for Agrona to use mana.
          
          2- At some point in this story, will the inhabitants of Alacrya consider Toren a god or a divine figure?
          
          3-I'm curious about how FATE sees Toren, why up to this point I consider FATE to be a pest, or a nuisance, but like any cosmic entity, FATE could take advantage of Toren by making him their representative or a herald?
          
          My opinion: man, I swear I laughed a lot imagining a Fate upset because Toren is ruining what he had prepared for the world to advance, since the spear was almost destroyed when he faced the fire.
          
          4-man, I'm in doubt if Cecilia will really be brought to this world, since the world (Fate) can be very stubborn.

5- Will Toren be able to heal (repair) and awaken people's mana cores? Because if so it would be a good incentive for the people of Alacrya to rebel.
          
          6- Will you make a story based on this when you finish it?, like what if?
          Why would it be interesting to see a Toren more willing to commit darker acts?
          
          For example, what would have happened if Lady Dawn had disappeared or spiritually died after saving Toren when his body was dying, how would Toren take her death? Since she is the only being who has been there to guide him, comfort him in his time of need.
          
          7- Well, I have doubts if Fate will make a proposal to Toren as if giving him a position or a rank, as if assigning him the duty of guiding and caring for souls, and preventing more souls from another world from re-entering, in itself she would give Toren a position as guardian of souls (in short, death).
          
          8-Toren will meet another djinn, if so, he meets the djinn who taught Arthur how to mold the aether to take the form of a sword. (Well, I think it would be nice if Toren learned this technique, he could adapt it to use in battles).
          
          9-Will Toren have new runes and new emblems?