TMWhibzzy

Also another pice of news. I started my very first job and now I have 8h shifts every day witch is why I said I plan to at least edit one chapter per day. So hope that is it from me for now and have a wonderfull day.

TMWhibzzy

Hi everyone! I'm alive don't worry, just been kinda lazy to work on my books till now. Now I have finaly started to edit my book of the first night from the beginning already did a few chapters I want to edit at least a chapter per day, the story itself won't be changing I will mostly work on general dialog betven the characters and work on giving each character their own uniqe personality. Hope you'll like this change.

TMWhibzzy

Hii everyone! Sorry I haven't been on for a while now kinda was in my I don't want to do anything mood, tho I do plan to come back relatiely soon I hope tho no garanties since I'll be on a vacation. Anyway another piece of news I manages to win two first places in the contest I was in so Yea I'm preaty hiped about that; XD

Britanin

Dear author,
          
          I would like to take a moment to share my appreciation for your work. I found your story engaging and well structured and it kept my attention from beginning to end. 
          
          I also appreciated the effort put into formatting and presentation. The structure made the piece easy to read and helped the scenes flow smoothly which is not always easy to achieve in this kind of writing.
          
          Overall I enjoyed reading your work and found it thoughtfully constructed with strong potential. I look forward to seeing how your writing develops in the future.
          
          Kind regards,
          Ella xxx

TMWhibzzy

@Britanin Thank you for your review! I still plan on improving the dialog and pacing some more before continuing, also I'm curently working on my second book so unfortunatly there probably won't be Any uptades for that one for some while, if you're curios you Can also check out my second book to in the mean time!
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TMWhibzzy

New chapter "The Name Remembered" is out! (after 2 moths of no chapters tehe) 
          My new drawing is in the chapter hope you go check it out, I want to know your guys opinion on the drawing... and well while you're there mind as well read the chapter, ya know since you're there XD

TMWhibzzy

@obsessionwithgods Hahaha lol, common it's not that long a time and it's not like I sat on my ass the whole time XD
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obsessionwithgods

@ TMWhibzzy  and the world is gonna end tmrw!!
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