Hi! Your first chapter is lovely and truly captures the readers heart! Your writing also gave me a strong visual aid like watching a movie which is what I love in books. Excited to read more! Bravo!
We have cone to the end of this magical journey and soon we begin the next but for the moment I am hoping to get more eyes on this story and opinions and thoughts. Please feel free to be honest, point out any issues because I want this to be a published book . Anyone looking to be a beta reader please reach out as soon as possible. Thank you and enjoy the read.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/393003546