I like your premise in ALL'S FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR. The part about the FIRST love.
One of the vampires in CHRISTIAN VAMPIRES http://www.wattpad.com/story/1588853-christian-vampires-2012-watty-award-undiscovered can't move on because of his first love.
It is not the focus of the story, but like yours, it is a factor!
I just might have to check yours out to see how you wrote the same!!!!
Peace, BCG
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