BlackCherryGlass

I like your premise in ALL'S FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR.   The part about the FIRST love.   
              One of the vampires in CHRISTIAN VAMPIRES http://www.wattpad.com/story/1588853-christian-vampires-2012-watty-award-undiscovered    can't move on because of his first love.
               It is not the focus of the story, but like yours, it is a factor!
          I just might have to check yours out to see how you wrote the same!!!!
              Peace, BCG