Skyinkwriter

Hi, sorry to bother you. I read your book, and it was good! But I felt it was a bit short, and the emotions moved too quickly. I hope you understand that I mean adding more emotions could help readers connect better. That’s just my feedback as a reader.
          
          If you have some time, I’d really appreciate it if you could read my book and share your thoughts on how I can improve my writing.

megmaa_writes

Abhi padh bhi lo acchi hai yeh novel♥️
          
          This story is Indian but you'll get translation to every single line..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/371740090?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=megmaa_writes
          
          We checked your bio and you were not against promoting that is why we are promoting here. But if you are against promoting our story on your platform, then make sure to reply, I'll immediately delete this message from your conversation board.

AlgonightAquanomics

Hello there ! I just started writing and looking for feedback so it would mean alot of anyone could show some interest and give this story some of your precious time.. Thank you  
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389594869?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=AlgonightAquanomics
          
          
          
          If promoting stories isn't allowed here then feel free to delete it .... I apologise for any inconvenience