Tabitha302

Oh my god. Oh my god. I completely forgot this existed. Should I keep writing that book..

Tabitha302

I’m so sorry for not posting. I feel like I’m being so rude to you guys I promise that I’m gonna try and make my new book a good book 

Tabitha302

@billlswifee ty for understanding
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billlswifee

It’s okay don’t worry!!
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Tabitha302

Dear how ever many fans I have,
          I am literally so lost into my book. I feel like I need to change alot of stuff so, I will be. I will be changing the name, the plot, basically everything. Please don't leave me when I do this.  Ilysm ❤️

ilovetomkaulitz45

Can you read my story and give me feedback 

Tabitha302

It's good but, I feel like you should definitely add more stuff leading up to the smut and you should use more details to how they are acting. Also, quotation marks help alot! Example: "Hi how are you!" He said with a bright smile. Smut Example: he put his hand don my thigh, etc. These are just suggestions, you don't have to use them! ❤️
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