TaeZohra

Looking for readers & honest feedback. _**_
          Hiii!!! Everyone!!
          
          I've been working on a BTS fanfiction called "RUN BTS: Indian Diaries" and I'd love for some people to read it and share their thoughts.
          
          The story follows BTS as they spend an entire year in India for a special Run BTS project. They stay with the chaotic but loving Shah family and experience Indian culture, festivals, road trips, friendships, emotional healing, family bonds, and slow-burn romance.
          
          What you can expect:
          
          Family comedy and chaos
          
          Indian festivals and traditions
          
          Emotional character growth
          
          Slow-burn romance
          
          Friendship and found-family vibes
          
          Lots of BTS humor and heartwarming moments
          
          I'm looking for honest feedback on:
          
          Storyline
          
          Characters
          
          Pacing
          
          Dialogues
          
          Emotional moments
          
          Overall reading experience
          
          If you're interested in reading and supporting a fellow writer, please let me know! Your feedback would mean a lot and help me improve the story.
          
          Thank you for your time and support!https://www.wattpad.com/story/411891703?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=NishitaMakwana1

Sorry for posting this on your board without permission, I just wanted to share this story here. Hope you don’t mind.
          
          When a billionaire addicted to pleasure gets addicted to the innocent caretaker of his personal library… their worlds collide in ways they never expected.
          
          Jeon Jungkook is a self-made billionaire, the powerful CEO of Jeon Enterprise. He has everything in life except peace.
          Kang Yn is an orphan who grew up fighting for survival. With nothing but her scholarship and determination, she finds peace in her simple life.
          
          But what happens when her peace is shaken by the storm that is Jungkook?
          
          “She was the silence he never knew he needed. He was the storm she was never prepared for.”
          
          If you love intense romance mixed with pain, passion, and fate pulling two opposites together, this is a story you’ll want to dive into.
          
          
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395504368?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=pragkookify

Hey I am following you since 1 year 

Hey where are you

I will upload the part two tomorrow

Hi I'm Kim Youna.

The first part of devils prison will be out on wednesday....
          Good night....

Please post the next part of your story...as soon as possible..
          I'm waiting for it....I want to know what will happen next in lust devil ff ..pls sis....

I hope everything is going well in your life author, and if not then don't worry because one day everything will be alright. we all are with you. You can share your everything with us, after all we are a family right? 

I want to help you in writing coz I love your stories as well as you... But I've no experience in writing on wattpad.... I've always read on it but never wrote... 
          How about you give me some suggestions???