@Taeisykook dat's cool. I'll just use this platform then. I love your writing style it's really professional and discriptive. Although some parts I was confused as to what was happening, most of the book I really did like it. Even the way you explained the characters was amazing and done well. (Sorry for my bad grammar today is not my day) Overall, I really liked it and I am looking forward to future 'episodes' But I do have one question though. In episode 2, they start speaking in dialouge, not for long though, but why is that? It confused me a little. I didn't really like it much, compared to the rest of the story it stood out but not in a good way? I'd say. It was more like... just there. Maybe if you explained it to me I'd understand why you wrote it like that. But overall It's amazing writing and I really do look forward to more chapters. -- Again this is my view of things, it doesn't go for everyone. --