I need help...
I'm making a new fic and I want your opinions on the summary.
My friends and I were all sitting in a booth at our local diner on a Friday night. Our food had already been dropped off by the waiter. We were all chatting up a storm when the entrance of the diner dinged. I glance at the door and see boys around our age walk in.
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“Hey fellas look at the sweet mammas over there”
I looked from my buddies face to the direction Taehyung nodded towards. And I was not gonna lie there were some pretty looking omegas. But only one doll caught my attention and I could not remove my eyes from him.
“Hey, omegas,”
"Hey there"
what yall think?