kimtxee
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Hey! I was really inspired after reading your stories so I decided to try writing one myself I've recently started working on my very first story if you'd like to read it I'd truly appreciate your thoughts and feedback.
Also, if you notice any mistakes or areas where I can improve please feel free to correct me and guide me I'm still learning and would love to improve my writing skills
Thank you!
kimtxee
@TaenjaliFanfics Thank you so much for reading my story and sharing your feedback as this is my first story, I'm still learning and improving with each chapter. Your suggestions were really helpful, and I'll definitely work on the pacing, emotional depth, and cliffhangers. Thank you again for your support it truly means a lot to me ✨
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TaenjaliFanfics
@kimtxee Hey! Thanks for trusting me with your story and asking for my feedback. ❤️ I read up to Part 8, and I think you've put a lot of effort into building the plot and the characters. Personally, I felt the pacing was a little slow for my taste. I was expecting a bit more tension, emotional conflict, or moments that would make me eager to immediately click on the next chapter. I think adding stronger cliffhangers, more emotional or intense interactions between the characters, or some unexpected twists could make readers even more invested in the story. Every reader enjoys different things, so this is just my personal opinion. Please don't take it negatively. Keep writing and improving—practice always helps, and it's great that you're sharing your work with others and asking for feedback.♡
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