kimtxee

Hey! I was really inspired after reading your stories so I decided to try writing one myself I've recently started working on my very first story if you'd like to read it I'd truly appreciate your thoughts and feedback.
          Also, if you notice any mistakes or areas where I can improve please feel free to correct me and guide me I'm still learning and would love to improve my writing skills
           Thank you! 

kimtxee

@TaenjaliFanfics Thank you so much for reading my story and sharing your feedback as this is my first story, I'm still learning and improving with each chapter. Your suggestions were really helpful, and I'll definitely work on the pacing, emotional depth, and cliffhangers. Thank you again for your support it truly means a lot to me ✨
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TaenjaliFanfics

@kimtxee Hey! Thanks for trusting me with your story and asking for my feedback. ❤️
            
            I read up to Part 8, and I think you've put a lot of effort into building the plot and the characters.
            
            Personally, I felt the pacing was a little slow for my taste. I was expecting a bit more tension, emotional conflict, or moments that would make me eager to immediately click on the next chapter. I think adding stronger cliffhangers, more emotional or intense interactions between the characters, or some unexpected twists could make readers even more invested in the story.
            
            Every reader enjoys different things, so this is just my personal opinion. Please don't take it negatively. Keep writing and improving—practice always helps, and it's great that you're sharing your work with others and asking for feedback.♡
            
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Ulbert5

Author ! I just finished to read "My heartless bully". I love it! It's so full of emotions and I actually cried more than one time. I hope you are planning on writing other stories as captivating as this one. 
          
          While reading the comments I discovered that you have a youtube channel but I can't find it. Can you please tell how it is called? I am thrilled to see your content.
          
          Hope you have a really good day❤️

Ulbert5

Thank you so much !
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Aerumff

@Ulbert5 Ahhh please don’t be mad, author-nim! I know I’m totally spilling the beans here… but I just couldn’t keep it to myself any longer!
            To my fellow emotional wrecks (yes, I cried too!), the YouTube channel you’re all looking for is "Taenjali fanfics".
            Author-nim pours just as much heart into the videos as in the stories—trust me, it’s worth it! Especially "My Perfect Match S2"  OMG… ! Absolute masterpiece. Literal chef’s kiss. Jitni tarif karu utni kam hai!
            
            Like seriously, how can someone be this talented in both writing and videos? Not fair!
            So yes… I might’ve ruined the surprise a tiny bit… but it came straight from my overflowing heart I just wanted more people to see how talented and incredible you are♥️
            So… pretty please forgive me for the little spoiler? It came from a place of love and fangirl excitement!
            
            Love you author nim ♥️
            
            
            
            
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ThornPrincess_15

@Ulbert5 yes author-nim even I wanna know ur youtube channel!
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Aerumff

          I'm compelled to take a moment to express my heartfelt admiration for yesterday's episode of "My Perfect Match S2" that Your writing is truly enchanting, and I'm left struggling to find the words to convey the depth of my emotions.
          Your dedication to crafting a narrative that's both captivating and emotionally resonant is evident in every sentence. I've found myself obsessively checking for updates literally every day , eager to be transported back into the world you've so masterfully created.
          
          The way you weave together the complexities of human emotion, crafting characters that feel so real, so relatable, is nothing short of remarkable. 
          As I read your episodes, I feel like I'm experiencing the story firsthand. The twists, the turns, the dialogue – every detail is so meticulously crafted that I'm fully immersed in the world you've created. It's as if I'm watching a K-drama, but one that's tailored to my imagination, with characters that feel like old friends.
          Author Nim, you deserve every ounce of recognition and love for the incredible hard work you pour into your craft. Your passion for storytelling shines through on every page, and it's a testament to your skill as a writer that I feel so deeply invested in the journeys of your characters.
          Regarding recommendations, I'd be thrilled to see you explore themes like time travel, parallel worlds, or even a sweet mafia love story. Honestly, though, I'm confident that anything you write will be pure magic.
          
          Keep sparkling, keep shining, dear Author Nim! You deserve all the love in the world.
          Love you so much ♥️

TaenjaliFanfics

@Aerumff I appreciate the way you described your feelings through these amazing words. Thank you for backing me always. Love you girl from core of my heart❤️
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