TaintedPages

hey, would you mind critiquing my story, Into The World as it is so far? I'm not sure how it sounds from a readers pov. thanks x.

Thank you for following <3 I love you so much <3

:) Keep up the great work!

@PS_IWroteThis Np. I wish you the best of luck!! ^.^

I think you just need to be more active on clubs, and comment on other people's books :) 

Hye, I was wondering if you could check out my book, The Northern Lights, and lemme know what you think, it would mean a lot. --- By the way, the vote button challengeth thou to a duel of... clicking! ;)  --- Thank You!!

@BentLettersTornPages Yeah, that is great :)

@DelaneyWillow Awesome! Is it okay if I just pm the chapter to you?  

@BentLettersTornPages  If you haven't found anyone else willing to preread you story, I will help ya out. :)

So I have the first chapter of my story finished but I'm waiting until Monday to post it. Would anyone be willing to read through it and tell me what you think and what I could change? I would pm it to you and you can either change it and send it back to me so I can read over it afterwards or you can just send the advice to me. Anyone? (: