Nana

Hello. I am currently writing a book and i would really love some feedback so i can polish it more. Can you please read it? No pressure tho and you can remove my message if you don't find it cool
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389633732?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MagoAtaraxia

Hey btw I'm planning on making another book it's gonna be a straw hat and android 21 reader :D tell me if u like it oke

GYAT.