Hey, will you please critique my story if you get a moment?
Title: "Verheli"
Genre: Adventure/Action
Summary: The war has ended years ago, but ghosts of the past will not leave him alone. We only wish to live in peace, but whether it is his memories, or those trying to bring him back into the fighting, my father just can't seem to be left alone. Is there truly redemption for those who survive? I have been kept from the killing, and he has long since given up his ways, but I am not sure how long that will last... He says if we can manage to get to Damascus, we should be safe, and no longer have to see the fighting, but that seems to be a world away...