Hey author, pls give us a chapter from Arabella's POV! I feel like we're missing out on understanding her emotions and what's really going on in her mind. Someone mentioned that her actions are starting to feel a bit robotic, and I kind of agree. While we know she's done a lot to keep the brothers safe, it feels more like she's just returning a favor, and it's hard to connect with her. The brothers' emotions are clear, but Arabella's feelings seem a bit hidden. I can somewhat see traces of Rose and Rosetta in Arabella, but she comes across as the coldest of them all. She has some dialogues after her transformation, but they mostly feel like answers rather than her expressing herself or sharing her thoughts. It makes it hard to really understand her character. And I'm also curious about why Arthur is being portrayed as so evil... it feels a little off. It would be awesome to see more from the brothers' POV too! It could give us more insight into their side of the story.
Also, if I remember correctly, you hadn't written a single chapter from Rosetta's POV in Say You Are Mine (though I could be mistaken since it's been a while), so are we not going to get any chapters from Arabella's POV here as well?