As you can see, I've already made some changes to the name & plan to allow it to evolve along with the story. There will also be updates through the old chapters so don't be alarmed if you go back and find a passage that dosn't read the same as it did 2 months ago.
Again all the aspects from my prviosu message apply, if you see any errors or thing you don't like, please don't hesitate to let me know!! I love criticisms as this is the first book I've ever written or tried writing!.
I'm not sure if you already noticed this, but I also slipped some beefleaf (TGCF) fan fic into my works. Again my dumbs ass decided that there is only one part but I will keep updating that one part and adding stuff on!! I might do more later but I'm still not sure- Again I've never written fan fic before.
Thank you for your understanding :)
~Boonk