Tamaraleighkelley

@Lammalord Thanks, it's worth a try.  Let me know what you think of the short story.  Do you have any other stories you want comments on?  I can offer more in-depth editorial advice if you like.

Mr_Aek

@Tamaraleighkelley when I say my account I mean this one  @Freelove - but all my content there is gone :p
          
          you never replied to Twin btw, so I doubt she ever read your message XD
          
          only downside to linking a chapter is that links don't work in the actual chapter itself.  I put it on my profile and told everyone "want more, click the link on my profile!!!!"  but half this this is 14 year old girls who don't have money soo... there's that :p

Mr_Aek

@Tamaraleighkelley you can post a few chapters on here and tell readers want more buy the book here XXX I did that on my account - got... 100 or so sales and 900 give-aways during a free promo (on amazon).  Woulda probably been more if the entire book didn't already have 200,000 hits on wattpad (ie pretty much everyone already read it...)  - but only if you didn't sign any "exclusive rights" contracts - I did now (so the book isn't on wattpad).
          
          also welcome to wattpad PS: them ambassador messages (few) people get - are not automatic XD