Hi !
I just started "Beauty and the Beast" and really so far I think it’s great. On the other hand, there is something that disturbs me, it is the fact that you write with "you" and not "I", I do not know what has to say for the other readers but I find it difficult to put this in the character’s shoes. But otherwise continues like this. (Sorry if there are syntax errors or other, I use google translation because I'm French and my english is very bad.).
I wish you a good continuation.
Have a good day/night.
Charlie ☺️