I love soul land

Hi there. 

This is link https://www.wattpad.com/story/345297757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SoulLandDianXe&wp_originator=a369Ynrqyfi6dChy1fO%2BdC%2FfIZKOeEhM4slcesFf4t0yo1Rxp2sk0CgXhDeFIKEKzkufU4hB6YSjNOEf564eOQs6UncFLTTzy%2Foa8hFbyhlli5o5cGHlNBE0xOuzodCA

I have wrote story please read someone and give me suggestions 

Hello bro

Hi there. Em..... It's me the person who wrote the 'Blue Sliver Love' story. Oh god this is so awkward, but you see I just lost my account and can't seem to login anymore so I will be continuing the story from this new account and I just thought that I should inform you..... Since well you are.... Well I don't exactly know what we are. 
          
          Friends?
          
           Cyber friends?
          
          Avatars on Wattpad?
          
          Yeah I see it too. It's beginning to get weird so let me cut things short. I just wanted you to know and hopefully spread the message if you can.
          
          Thank you for your time and I hope you understand.