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Your welcome. It was a great book. 

Thank yoooooou for all those very lovely votes for Ignitable...your support means so much ♥️♥️♥️

@TanteShineyHiney  Well, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm finishing a new book right now, 'En garde, Milady', another Lori type character but with swords in the Regency period. My outline for the second book of The Foresters is complete, but I'm filling in still. I think of things then add to it. I've completed 7 chapters, but until I have the story in my head I won't put it up. I am one of those orderly kind of writers. Especially when they have multiple characters. Otherwise, it would be a mess! I will send out a message, The Foresters are back. Then you will know. Glad you liked the book! Thanks for reading.

I loved it. When is the second book coming out?

So wonderful to have you back, hun... now reading The Reason ♥️

You're welcome. Thanks for writing it. 

Found it!!!  There isn't any confusion, Eric (so far ;) has just popped up out of nowhere. All the other players have been introduced in the first two books so there is a familiarity. But I'm enjoying Milo's forcefulness. I don't know how I feel about Eric yet. Great job!!! Keep it up. 

I'm kind of spinning a little. I'm pulled in for sure, but I'm already getting a little heartbroken for Milo. I wouldn't say I love Eric's character yet. He just jumped into the pool out of nowhere. 

Hello, 
            I have read the first three chapter or you book. That is the route I customarily take when chancing a new author or work. Since you asked for me to read it, I only thought it fair to explain why I could no longer continue to read it and offer assistance. Your dialogue between characters should be spaced out so a clear conversation can be seen. Your paragraphs seem lengthy and can feel like a mouthful to a reader. In-head monologues and thoughts can be put in italics to show the character is not verbalizing the thought but are relevant to the story and character building process. That would all be an easy fix however if the story line offered more. The angst filled teen card has been so overplayed and rewritten so much, it crashed and burned when you were probably still in nappies. It speaks to what I assume is your age, the total amount of your life experiences, and limits of your imagination. Dig deeper my dear. There is more to be told then this. You have the ability. 
            Best of Luck,
            Whitney