Please give me feedback on my writing. I don't mind getting negative feedbacks.
I am not a author, just a little girl who has so much interest in writing.
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Tanzila8
Jan 06, 2016 09:21PM
Last year I received this message: Its my great sympathy to inform you about the death of our beloved and well-known Mr 2015. He survived with 12 wives, 52 children and 365 grandchildren. The burial...View all Conversations
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My Shiny Blue Shoes
On her first birthday dad got her a soft cuddly teddy bear. The little baby girl carried her teddy bear, with...