XD. I still can't see why it's cringy....I tried. :). Besides, I'm adding to it tomorrow. I just got done adding to my musical story. The Two Faces of LividCoffee. Don't read it unless you like musicals.
If you want to read a story that doesn't have any fluff. I believe you would like Wild Actions Tamed Passions, but it does involve a little abuse. I hope you won't mind and I support all of your choices :)