angelharrison87

Could you write a sequel to the alpha sniper I would like to know more about Eric and Jean kids

Tastch

@ angelharrison87  unfortunately, another story about their kids isn't on the drawing board. I have thought about it, but I'm not spending much time on writing anymore and it would suck to post a couple of chapters to then not finish the story. 
            My priority right now are the other unfinished stories and it's probably gonna take some time, but who knows, maybe someday I'm up for it, but now just isn't the time.
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Plumpalways

Hye Tanya,
          
          I enjoyed your work in alphas sniper. I'm just wondering are you aware that your story is similar to another authors story. Even the plot and everything are similar. Is it your account too?

Tastch

Hello @ Plumpalways. 
            I'm happy that you enjoyed the story. Yes, a lot have told me about the similarities, but it is not my account. I'm now trying to change it up a bit, but the storyline is not going to change, so it will probably still resemble the other story. 
            Nothing I can do about it even it it sucks. Thank you for reading though.
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AnnapurnaShastry

hey Tanya,
          
          alpha's sniper wonderful work - bringing the omega out and making them powerful - superb direction...
          
          but there should be some awesome explanation for jean's 'dilated' delivery of the pups.... just as the moon goddess blessed the werewolf males to carry pups, make the delivery of pups great to the dot, say just for the delivery he grows a canal or whatever idea you can bring out, will go a long way...
          
          what say?
          
          also, please proof read and ask your friends to do so too before you post it up cos beautiful works need amazing presentation....
          
          what say?
          
          its just my opinion.... but its your story.... right?

Tastch

@ AnnapurnaShastry thank you. It's funny cause I was actually thinking of doing just that. The birth was a little unrealistic, which I liked at the time, but as I gained more experienced with writing, I saw something missing, which is why I am making the finishing touches. And hopefully making the story more solid and exciting. 
            Thank you for your message. About the proof read, I can only do so much as I do not have someone to ask about it, but that's how it is. I do my best. 
            I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for your kind words and happy reading.
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girlyoudunno

Thank you sooo much for adding More than Meets the Eye to your reading list, love! It's always wonderful when a reader steps out of the silent shadows and gives a sign they like the story. You just made some girl somewhere very happy *giggles*
          Have the loveliest day, love xx