Tatarul

Also if you are interested in once upon a time check out my new story!

@AliceCullens_Bestie thank you for the feedback i will work on it

@AliceCullens_Bestie I think the story concept is good, interesting idea for fanfic. What I did not like was that all events or plot seem rushed. Many important things happen too fast and w/o a believable reason/explanation. I stopped reading at the chapter "Ariana?". How she gets with Alice to me is important, as well as how it is justified how Alice breaks with Jasper. To me, it could have been better to not get them (Alice and Jasper) together since the beginning or to have them together knowing they were not mates and just getting company (friends with benefits even) until one of them found their mate. This example was not the only "event" reason but I think it represents. Please take this with a grain of salt, it is my opinion and my likes and dislikes, it is not intended to reflect on you or your craft... I do not like and consider bad many classical literary stories from worldly recognized authors, my opinion alone means nothing... ;-)
            
            Maybe in few words I can say that what mainly did not work for me is that was rushed...

@Tatarul Oh no problem at all! I’m glad you let me know, actually, so I can work on them as soon as my exams are over. Thank you. 

@spontaneousbraindump you should not. My opinions and likes are one of many you receive. That I don't find it particularly good for me should not mean much.
            
            Thinks I did not like were the way Natasha was out of character (not really how Black Widow behavior and thinking should be) and same for rest of the avengers, i.e. all of them being terrified of Natasha being mad in the kitchen. Other is that many things were explained and happening very simplistic, like her powers and how to control them (from a blog or something like that)
            
            Again, this is my opinion and is not meant to criticize your work as to say is bad in general, there are people that will not agree with me.
            
            Please don't stop, continue writing, I am sure I will like your next work seeing how you care to look into getting to know how your readers think about your stories.
            
            thanks

@-nxtslady Hey, thanks for reaching out. Yes, your books seem pretty interesting. Will try to read at least one of them this week...