So, I’ve been thinking about this for a while now and I’ve came to a conclusion.
I’m most likely going to take down my Neptunia story for a while so I can redo the entire story.
Now, while I understand that redoing the story to most people would mean changing damn near everything about it, that is not my intention. I just plan on making changes to past parts and all that. I’m going to be taking scenes out and adding new ones from my own brain.
I realized now and I don’t know why it took me this long, but I’m not happy with how I wrote the story. I took a lot of inspiration from the anime “Fairy Tail” that I got too much behind that inspiration and added scenes that very closely resembled scenes from the anime. Not to mention my OC’s power, so I want to change that. I’ve come up with an idea on how to keep him the same, powers and all, but make it something different than “Dragon Slayer Magic.” And don’t worry, I plan on keeping the story progression the same, the the idea on where I want this story to go, I’m not changing that.
Full transparency, this story isn’t doing as well as I’d like it to be, but instead of giving up on it, I will continue to try and make it better than what it currently is. This franchise/anime really helped me out when I was younger, so the way I see it, I can’t give up on it just because it’s not doing as good as I’d like it to be.
I just wanted to get some thoughts on this, but ultimately, I will most likely take the story down, make edits, and repost them.