TatsuyaHisaki

So, I’ve been thinking about this for a while now and I’ve came to a conclusion. 
          	
          	I’m most likely going to take down my Neptunia story for a while so I can redo the entire story.
          	
          	
          	Now, while I understand that redoing the story to most people would mean changing damn near everything about it, that is not my intention. I just plan on making changes to past parts and all that. I’m going to be taking scenes out and adding new ones from my own brain. 
          	
          	I realized now and I don’t know why it took me this long, but I’m not happy with how I wrote the story. I took a lot of inspiration from the anime “Fairy Tail” that I got too much behind that inspiration and added scenes that very  closely resembled scenes from the anime. Not to mention my OC’s power, so I want to change that. I’ve come up with an idea on how to keep him the same, powers and all, but make it something different than “Dragon Slayer Magic.” And don’t worry, I plan on keeping the story progression the same, the the idea on where I want this story to go, I’m not changing that.
          	
          	
          	Full transparency, this story isn’t doing as well as I’d like it to be, but instead of giving up on it, I will continue to try and make it better than what it currently is. This franchise/anime really helped me out when I was younger, so the way I see it, I can’t give up on it just because it’s not doing as good as I’d like it to be. 
          	
          	I just wanted to get some thoughts on this, but ultimately, I will most likely take the story down, make edits, and repost them.

Tiagoalbuquerque12

@TatsuyaHisaki So, do you intend to make a Fate Grand Order fanfic one day? If so, I have an idea of ​​a power for your character
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Tiagoalbuquerque12

@TatsuyaHisaki and it's also an excuse for him to have a giant harem and Plutia is in the harem since I really like her (Rom and Ram will be in the harem, so to speak, because they will see Jacob as an older brother, etc., at first they will be suspicious of him and everything else, but then he gains their trust and they want his attention, etc.)
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TatsuyaHisaki

So, I’ve been thinking about this for a while now and I’ve came to a conclusion. 
          
          I’m most likely going to take down my Neptunia story for a while so I can redo the entire story.
          
          
          Now, while I understand that redoing the story to most people would mean changing damn near everything about it, that is not my intention. I just plan on making changes to past parts and all that. I’m going to be taking scenes out and adding new ones from my own brain. 
          
          I realized now and I don’t know why it took me this long, but I’m not happy with how I wrote the story. I took a lot of inspiration from the anime “Fairy Tail” that I got too much behind that inspiration and added scenes that very  closely resembled scenes from the anime. Not to mention my OC’s power, so I want to change that. I’ve come up with an idea on how to keep him the same, powers and all, but make it something different than “Dragon Slayer Magic.” And don’t worry, I plan on keeping the story progression the same, the the idea on where I want this story to go, I’m not changing that.
          
          
          Full transparency, this story isn’t doing as well as I’d like it to be, but instead of giving up on it, I will continue to try and make it better than what it currently is. This franchise/anime really helped me out when I was younger, so the way I see it, I can’t give up on it just because it’s not doing as good as I’d like it to be. 
          
          I just wanted to get some thoughts on this, but ultimately, I will most likely take the story down, make edits, and repost them.

Tiagoalbuquerque12

@TatsuyaHisaki So, do you intend to make a Fate Grand Order fanfic one day? If so, I have an idea of ​​a power for your character
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Tiagoalbuquerque12

@TatsuyaHisaki and it's also an excuse for him to have a giant harem and Plutia is in the harem since I really like her (Rom and Ram will be in the harem, so to speak, because they will see Jacob as an older brother, etc., at first they will be suspicious of him and everything else, but then he gains their trust and they want his attention, etc.)
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TatsuyaHisaki

So I have a very important question…
          
          As a lot of you know, in my Azur Lane book, I introduced Yamato, Musashi, and Shinano. The thing is is that I introduced a fan-made version of Yamato and Musashi while putting in the official AL Shinano.
          
          I want to add the official AL Musashi into the story, but that’s where the problem lies. My question to everyone is “Do I add in the official Musashi while keeping the one I already added and have two Musashi’s in the story or do I go back and edit the story to where the official AL Musashi was the one that was added into the story instead of the fan-made Musashi?”
          
          I’ve been thinking about this for a really long time and I’m having a hard time deciding what to do. Now, going back and editing the story that’s already completed isn’t exactly “ideal”. I’d have to change images, voice lines, and even change how Musashi “speaks”. If I keep the original Musashi in and add the official AL Musashi, I feel like that would be pretty difficult to pull off and make everything work.
          
          
          I just want everyone’s opinion on what I should do or hey, if anyone has an idea on how I can make both versions work, then by all means please let me know. Thank you guys in advance!

levikjellin1

@TatsuyaHisaki I think that you should keep both. Seems like the easiest option
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TatsuyaHisaki

I have a question for those who read my Azur Lane books. How do y’all think about the fight scenes? Is there anything I can do better when it comes to writing scenes like that? Or is there anything y’all want to see in the story, doesn’t have to be a fight or anything like that. Like it could be Jacob and a certain character or something. 
          
          
          Basically, I want to know what y’all think of the full story so far (Book 1 & 2). If y’all have any suggestions of scenes y’all want to see let me know here or if y’all want to dm me, let me know and we can figure something out in terms of dming messages.

TatsuyaHisaki

Hello everyone, I’m back. Sorry for my absence, but I kinda got Writer’s Block and at the same time, I kinda didn’t feel like working on any of my stories for a while. However, I’m back now, so I’m gonna storage working on my books again.

PenumbralShade

@TatsuyaHisaki hey how’s it goin? It’s been a while since we have spoken. Hope you’re doin alright 
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TatsuyaHisaki

@Ootori_Shikikan Lol yeah, nice to see you again old friend. Thanks for the warm welcome back
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Ootori_Shikikan

@TatsuyaHisaki 
            
            Ye, welcome back old friend, been a century since I saw you here but hey, glad to have you back.
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TatsuyaHisaki

Merry Christmas Eve everyone!! So I’m really here to say one thing. For Christmas tomorrow, I have to work because I have duty on Christmas Day. Even with that, if I can get done with what I’m planning to do, I have a Christmas present for you all tomorrow...
          
          I’m not gonna say anymore on it, so don’t bother asking...!
          
          Anyway, that’s all I really wanted to say. Have a Merry Christmas Eve everyone. Stay safe and have a nice night!

TatsuyaHisaki

I’M BACK EVERYONE!!! I was on an underway for a whole month, as I’m sure I told you all, but I’m back now, safe and sound. On a separate note, I have been working on my medieval fantasy story, so that should be coming out soon. Not only that, but I will be picking back up on a couple other stories in the near future as well, just a heads up.

flamedragon224

It’s good to c u back 
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Heroesfan10009

@TatsuyaHisaki Oh that’s really cool to hear and welcome back buddy.
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