@qveenNic_ i absolutely love the way you planned things out and they way you started it off. The book starts off very strong so you're going to have to keep going strong. I would Like to see A Twist in the story Because it seems like tee is going to end up with Isaiah, so there should be something Different there. You ahouldnt change anything , just when you have time , go back and Edit aome parts of the grammar and words thats about it. Buy so far my favorite character is serenity